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1)
The man walked
across the road.
2) A snake is coming
towards you.
3)
The child is asking
for a toy.
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1)
The man staggered and stumbled
across the road.
or
The man darted
across the road.
2) A snake is quietly slithering towards you.
3) The child is whining and pleading
for a toy.
or
The child attempted again to beg
for a toy.
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2) A diamond back snake is quietly slithering between the dry grasses towards you.
3)
The tear-stained
child is whining and pleading to
her embarrassed mother for another
toy.
or
The small, determined
child, attempted again to
persuade grandfather to buy the
amazing, mechanical toy.
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